Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Leaving (script)

This mini script is another one that I wrote a while ago. It experiments with showing actions and parentheticals through dialog (although not all of them).

Enjoy,
- Reece


FADE IN:


INT. DAVID'S WORK - OFFICE - EVENING


DAVID is hard at work.


MICHELLE approaches him.


MICHELLE

Last one to leave again, huh?


DAVID

Yeah.


MICHELLE

Look... I don't mean to pry, but you're working
yourself too hard. You need to relax, enjoy
yourself.


DAVID

I guess.


MICHELLE

When was the last time you and Jessica went out?


DAVID

I don't know.


MICHELLE

(touching his shoulder)

Exactly. So take her out for a meal. She's your
wife for God's sake.


Michelle turns to leave.


MICHELLE (CONT'D)

Trust me on this. Ask her.


He pauses, looking back at the empty office, before turning off the
light.


INT. DAVID'S HOUSE - EVENING


DAVID comes home to JESSICA, his beautiful wife. He kisses her on the
cheek.


JESSICA

Where have you been?


DAVID

At work... you know how much this means to me.


JESSICA

I made us dinner.


DAVID

Great! I'm starving.


JESSICA

You were late, so I threw it out!


DAVID

Fine, I'll get something myself.


INT. DAVID'S HOUSE - STUDY - EVENING


DAVID settles down amongst piles of paper work.


JESSICA is standing in the doorway.


JESSICA

Goodnight.


DAVID

(absorbed in his work)

Night. I'll be right up.


JESSICA

Sure.


Jessica turns and heads upstairs.


INT. DAVID'S HOUSE - STUDY - NIGHT


DAVID is still at work -- it is now past midnight.


INT. DAVID'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - NIGHT


JESSICA is fast asleep, her arm around David's side of the bed -- it
is empty.


INT. DAVID'S HOUSE - KITCHEN - MORNING


DAVID and JESSICA have an argument while making breakfast. JESSICA
storms off.


INT. DAVID'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - MORNING


There are empty suitcases, some clothes and personal items of Jessica's
scattered across the bed. JESSICA is searching the room for her personal
things, placing them on the bed.


DAVID enters.


DAVID

So that's it, you're leaving!


JESSICA

Like you care!


DAVID

Jessie, please...


JESSICA

Please what?!


DAVID

I don't want you to leave.


Jessica stops what she is doing and turns to David.


JESSICA

Since when did you give a damn about me?


DAVID

Since forever: I've always been there for you --
you know that, right?


JESSICA

I... I don't know anymore.


DAVID

What's that supposed to mean?


JESSICA

We've drifted apart. Ever since you got that
job, you've been distant, wrapped up in the work.


Jessica resumes her packing.


JESSICA (CONT'D)

I can't take it anymore.


DAVID

We can work this out.


JESSICA

It's too late for that, now!


DAVID

It's never too late; look, I... I don't want to
loose you.


JESSICA

You should have though about that before -- can
you pass me that blouse -- before you put work
first.


DAVID

This is not a good time to talk about this,
Jessica. Here, have your damn blouse!


JESSICA

It's always the wrong time.

(sighs)

What happened to us?


DAVID

I... I don't know.


JESSICA

We used to be so happy.


DAVID

I just... I... I want this to work. I want _us_
to work.


JESSICA

Great! _Now_ is the time you choose to care!


DAVID

I've always cared. I'm sorry if you feel like my
work has gotten in the way of our relationship,
but I like what I do and I want to support you,
take care of you. Where do you think that
necklace came from?


JESSICA

You want it back? Fine!


DAVID

No... no... that's not what I mean. It's yours,
so keep it.


JESSICA

What do you mean? Are you implying that I can't
take care of myself?


DAVID

I...


JESSICA

That is so typical!


DAVID

Wait! That's not what I'm saying. You are a
strong, beautiful woman. I have no doubts that
you could take care of yourself. But do you
want that life? To struggle to make money when
you could have that here?


JESSICA

But I need more! The money is great, don't get
me wrong, but money isn't everything. I want to
be loved. I want to curl up in your arms when
things are too much to handle. I want you to be
here for me, but you are too caught up in your
work to even notice I'm here!


Jessica closes her suitcase, then storms over to the door. She pauses
at the doorway, turning towards David.


JESSICA (CONT'D)

I hope you find what you want.


DAVID

I want you!


JESSICA

No. You don't. If you did, we wouldn't be in
this mess.


Jessica exits.


David collapses on the bed.


FADE OUT.

Monday, June 22, 2009

Goodbye My Love (script)

I wrote this a while back. It is an experiment at showing narrative on screen and an attempt at foreshadowing, despite it's short nature.

Enjoy,

- Reece




FADE IN:

EXT. HILL - DAY

MARIA looked out across the valley, standing on the rocky edge.

Her hair billows in the wind.

MARIA
Josephine, my love, I hope you can hear this
wherever you may be. I fell in love again
today. She's not as beautiful as you were...
(smiling)
Although she does have your eyes. I told her
about you and how we would go to the beach
together...

EXT. BEACH - DAY

MARIA and JOSEPHINE are walking down the sand dunes together, carrying
beach towels and other beach equipment. They are laughing.

MARIA (V.O.)
And lie on the sand for hours and hours.

They come to a fairly secluded area of the beach and spread the
blanket out.

MARIA (V.O.)
She said she would have liked to have met you.

Josephine takes out some Strawberries and proceeds to feed them to
Maria.

JOSEPHINE
So, what are they like?

MARIA
Delicious.

JOSEPHINE
(smiling)
Good.

MARIA (V.O.)
I think she would have liked you.

JOSEPHINE
I'm going to lie here for a while. I don't
have the energy for swimming at the moment.

Maria leans over Josephine's stretched out body and kisses her.

MARIA
Okay honey, I'll try not to take too long.

JOSEPHINE
You don't have to hurry on my part.

MARIA
Are you sure? You don't mind?

JOSEPHINE
Of course I don't.
(smiling)
Besides, it'll give me a chance to get some
sleep. I've been so tired lately.

Maria brushes Josephine's cheek. She gets up.

MARIA
Okay, sleepy head. I'll try not to wake you.

Josephine closes her eyes.

JOSEPHINE
Have fun, my darling Maria.

MARIA
Will do.

And with that, Maria runs off into the sea.

MARIA (V.O.)
Neither of us noticed it then, but your body
was pulling all of its resources into staying
alive.

INT. MARIA AND JOSEPHINE'S BEDROOM - MORNING

MARIA is lying next to JOSEPHINE, the dawn sun shining through the
window.

MARIA (V.O.)
Finally, it lost it's battle and you just let go.

Maria rolls over next to Josephine, cupping her hand on her cheek.

Maria gently kisses Josephine on the forehead... then the lips.

MARIA
Wake up, sleepy head.

Josephine does not stir.

MARIA
Joe?... Joe?...

Maria runs her fingers through Josephine's hair, a tear running down
her cheek.

MARIA
Wake up, my sweet Josephine.

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. CEMETARY - DAY

MARIA is kneeling next to a tombstone that reads:

IN LOVING MEMORY
JOSEPHINE KATERINA ADAMS
1988 - 2010

Maria is holding a single red rose.

MARIA (V.O.)
Eventually, everything dies. From the Earth we
came and to the Earth we return.

Maria kisses the rose and places it over Josephine's grave.

MARIA (V.O.)
I just wish...

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. HILL - DAY

MARIA is standing on the hill.

MARIA
(breaking down)
I just wish I had known you for longer.

In her hand is a single red rose.

MARIA
Goodbye my love.

And with that, she throws the rose over the rocky overhang to the
valley bellow.

Collapsing to the floor, she breaks down in tears.

FADE OUT.