I wrote this a while back. It is an experiment at showing narrative on screen and an attempt at foreshadowing, despite it's short nature.
Enjoy,
- Reece
FADE IN:
EXT. HILL - DAY
MARIA looked out across the valley, standing on the rocky edge.
Her hair billows in the wind.
MARIA
Josephine, my love, I hope you can hear this
wherever you may be. I fell in love again
today. She's not as beautiful as you were...
(smiling)
Although she does have your eyes. I told her
about you and how we would go to the beach
together...
EXT. BEACH - DAY
MARIA and JOSEPHINE are walking down the sand dunes together, carrying
beach towels and other beach equipment. They are laughing.
MARIA (V.O.)
And lie on the sand for hours and hours.
They come to a fairly secluded area of the beach and spread the
blanket out.
MARIA (V.O.)
She said she would have liked to have met you.
Josephine takes out some Strawberries and proceeds to feed them to
Maria.
JOSEPHINE
So, what are they like?
MARIA
Delicious.
JOSEPHINE
(smiling)
Good.
MARIA (V.O.)
I think she would have liked you.
JOSEPHINE
I'm going to lie here for a while. I don't
have the energy for swimming at the moment.
Maria leans over Josephine's stretched out body and kisses her.
MARIA
Okay honey, I'll try not to take too long.
JOSEPHINE
You don't have to hurry on my part.
MARIA
Are you sure? You don't mind?
JOSEPHINE
Of course I don't.
(smiling)
Besides, it'll give me a chance to get some
sleep. I've been so tired lately.
Maria brushes Josephine's cheek. She gets up.
MARIA
Okay, sleepy head. I'll try not to wake you.
Josephine closes her eyes.
JOSEPHINE
Have fun, my darling Maria.
MARIA
Will do.
And with that, Maria runs off into the sea.
MARIA (V.O.)
Neither of us noticed it then, but your body
was pulling all of its resources into staying
alive.
INT. MARIA AND JOSEPHINE'S BEDROOM - MORNING
MARIA is lying next to JOSEPHINE, the dawn sun shining through the
window.
MARIA (V.O.)
Finally, it lost it's battle and you just let go.
Maria rolls over next to Josephine, cupping her hand on her cheek.
Maria gently kisses Josephine on the forehead... then the lips.
MARIA
Wake up, sleepy head.
Josephine does not stir.
MARIA
Joe?... Joe?...
Maria runs her fingers through Josephine's hair, a tear running down
her cheek.
MARIA
Wake up, my sweet Josephine.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. CEMETARY - DAY
MARIA is kneeling next to a tombstone that reads:
IN LOVING MEMORY
JOSEPHINE KATERINA ADAMS
1988 - 2010
Maria is holding a single red rose.
MARIA (V.O.)
Eventually, everything dies. From the Earth we
came and to the Earth we return.
Maria kisses the rose and places it over Josephine's grave.
MARIA (V.O.)
I just wish...
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. HILL - DAY
MARIA is standing on the hill.
MARIA
(breaking down)
I just wish I had known you for longer.
In her hand is a single red rose.
MARIA
Goodbye my love.
And with that, she throws the rose over the rocky overhang to the
valley bellow.
Collapsing to the floor, she breaks down in tears.
FADE OUT.
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